Hi there, my name is Herbie and I am a student in room 6 at Owairaka School. I really like the story of your trip to australia. Have you thought about maybe using proper spelling and proofreading. If you would like to see my learning, my blog is http://odsherbertr.blogspot.co.nz/.
Hello my name is Rekshan from Owairaka school, I really like the pictures you added and the writing was clear.I think you should proof read before you publish Because you spelt Australia wrong.
How lucky to have a holiday in Australia! I like your computer-generated illustrations, well done! I know how that build up of pressure feels in your ears, it can be very painful. However, I am sure you soon forgot about it once you hit the theme parks. Something for next time, remember that the names of places (Australia, Greymouth) have capital letters.
Hi there, my name is Herbie and I am a student in room 6 at Owairaka School. I really like the story of your trip to australia. Have you thought about maybe using proper spelling and proofreading. If you would like to see my learning, my blog is http://odsherbertr.blogspot.co.nz/.
ReplyDeleteHello my name is Rekshan from Owairaka school, I really like the pictures you added and the writing was clear.I think you should proof read before you publish Because you spelt Australia wrong.
ReplyDeleteHow lucky to have a holiday in Australia! I like your computer-generated illustrations, well done! I know how that build up of pressure feels in your ears, it can be very painful. However, I am sure you soon forgot about it once you hit the theme parks.
ReplyDeleteSomething for next time, remember that the names of places (Australia, Greymouth) have capital letters.
Thanks everyone! For the information. I hope you all have a wonderful day! ^v^
ReplyDeleteHi fynn its Flynn here. I really like your Australia post. it is really funny. Maybye you can put some more writing in it next time.
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